Recently I've been looking at discussions on writing concerning
plot-driven stories vs. character-driven stories as well as having some of my own with other writers. I thought I'd share my
view on this topic.
There seems to be this divide among readers and writers when
it comes to plot-driven or character-driven stories. You could also say it's the same divide between genre and literary
stories, since genre stories tend to be driven by plot while literary
stories tend to be driven by character.
What I don't understand is why a story can't have both a
strong plot AND be populated with interesting characters we want to hear
all about. In fact, both are NECESSARY in a story.
Think of the characters in a story as these impressive art
masterpieces, like the Mona Lisa or the Venus de Milo. You know these works of art because you've learned about them and how famous they are. Now imagine these
great works of art sitting in the middle of the desert somewhere, somewhere far
away from civilization where no one can see them or experience them for
themselves. No one can interact with them. They're not DOING anything out there
but collecting desert sand. That's what character-driven stories are like. You know about these great people, but there's no interaction between you and them. You can't relate to them on a personal level. They don't want to come on an adventure with you.
Conversely, imagine this beautiful oasis in the middle of
the same desert. Maybe those same art pieces are on prominent display in the
desert somewhere, in this wonderful
resort by the lake, except this time you've never heard of them or seen them before. Now imagine you're in a car that's approaching the oasis, but
you're driving so fast that you just blow right by the oasis. You're moving so
fast you don't even know it's there. That's what plot-driven stories are like.
The action never stops long enough for you to appreciate the characters that
populate the story. You don't even notice their details. You really don't care who they are. They could be anyone, but they're not anyone you can really relate to either.
What each of these stories is missing is a sense of PACING.
There needs to be a balance between the amount of info you dump on the
characters in the story and the amount of action those characters are doing.
I've heard other writers say every sentence in the story should either
advance the plot or serve as character development. I'd like to add one more
caveat to this. You need a good mix of sentences that do each of these
things in your story.
So how do you achieve this? Here's a good rule of thumb.
Pick any page at random in your story. Or do the same in a book that's already
published. Read the page and make a red mark if something appears on that page
that clearly identifies characteristics of the characters that populate it. Now
reread the page and put a blue mark on it if some kind of action takes place.
It could be something as simple as a character pacing back and forth in an empty
room, but preferably the action is related to either the goal of
the character(s), or some setback or conflict the character(s) is/are
experiencing.
A good story should have both a red mark and a blue mark on
just about every page. If it doesn't, and this is your
manuscript, think about what you can add to the story to accomplish this.
Once you’ve achieved this, your story will break that divide
between the plot- and character-driven story readers. It'll open your book to a wider
audience. Create those works of art, make sure the readers slow down
and appreciate them, and then race those readers across the desert.
What are your thoughts on this? Do you tend to
go to one type of novel over the other when you read? When you write? Or do you enjoy that balance I
speak of?
