Tuesday, December 30, 2014

Closing out 2014, Ringing in 2015

Hi all

Sorry for my absence, but the holidays have been especially busy for me. I hope you are all enjoying the holiday season. I also hope that 2014 has been a productive writing year for all you writers out there.

Here are some loose ends I'd like to tie up for 2014:

* I didn't succeed at reaching 50,000 words for NaNoWriMo this year. I only managed to reach 10,666 words. But that's 10,666 words more than I had before I started. And, I'm planning on continuing to write that book until it's finished.

* I managed to review a few of the Book Expo America 2013 books I have, but I still have a lot more to go. I'm planning to fit in a lot more reading in the coming  year, especially because I'd like to go back to BEA next year.

* I did submit a few stories this year, but nothing was accepted for publication. I'm setting up some real goals for next year that'll improve my chances though. (See below.)

* I DID manage to get paid for some writing this year. I had a write-for-hire project I took on near the end of the year. It was fun, and challenging, and I hope to be able to do more of this type of writing in the coming year.

* I've taken a hiatus from the short story writing course I've been taking through my library, but I'm hoping to hop back into it at the beginning of next year.

For 2015, I have a couple of cool things lined up, which I'm not quite ready to announce yet. One of them involves an anthology I'm published in, but details are still being worked out. (If you hunt around the internet enough though, you may come across it.) The other involves some big plans I'm thinking of related to writing critique groups. So stay tuned!

Now, for New Year's resolutions...

In the past two years, I (erroneously) decided that New Year's resolutions weren't necessary. As a result, I've  not done much in the way of writing. I've since learned that while New Year's resolutions may not be some people's cup of tea, they DO work well for me. Therefore, I'm forcing myself to do one writing submission a month again. I'd like to say that each submission will be a NEW piece, but I'm not putting that restriction on myself this time. I just need to get back into the habit of submitting pieces for publication. To make it a little more interesting though, I'm forcing myself to make at least one of those submissions a book query. So by the end of 2015, I should have (at the very least) 11 shorter pieces submitted and one book. Now that I've posted it to my blog, I can keep myself honest too.

Thank you all for following along this year and for your continued readership.

Have a wonderful, safe, and happy New Year!

Thursday, November 6, 2014

NaNoWriMo 2014

Hi all

I don't have a lot of time for a full blog entry, but I thought I'd let everyone know that I'm attempting to write a novel for National Novel Writing Month, or NaNoWriMo, as it's affectionately called. I don't know how successful I'll be this time out, since I'm already way behind where I should be, but the point for me is to kick start my writing, even if I don't succeed.

For those unfamiliar with what I'm talking about, November is considered National Novel Writing Month, and for most people that equates to a fun challenge of writing an entire novel throughout the month of November. 50,000 words is the minimum amount of words to be considered as a complete novel during this challenge, and there are many people who (somehow) manage to generate much more than that. Still others have gone on from that challenge to clean up those messy first-draft novels and publish them. Erin Morgenstern's The Night Circus comes immediately to mind.

So why would anyone be crazy enough to write a novel in a month? Well, I'm glad you asked. Here are my top reasons for wanting to do it:

1. To give my writing a good kick in the pants.
2. To have some accountability. If I tell everyone I'm writing a novel, and this website tracks it, then everyone will know where I'm at with that. (And they can see that I'm currently VERY behind!)
3. To tell the internal editor to go on an extended vacation. There's nothing worse than the doubting, critical, "You'll never amount to anything" voice in your head trying to crush your dreams.You just don't have time for that person when you have such a tight deadline.
4. To simulate a tight deadline. Many people produce under tons of pressure, myself included.
And, most important of all...
5. To have some FUN!!!

Hopefully you get to experience this for one of those reasons above, or for your own personal ones. Now get out there and write that novel. There's still time to jump in!

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Before You Write, See THE RING

Hi all

As I stated before, Halloween is my favorite time of year. Like many of you who also enjoy that special day filled with ghouls, goblins, and oh yeah, candy too, one of the things I love to do is to watch some of my favorite scary movies. 


I've found over the years one movie in particular seems to have become a staple of my horror movie diet: The Ring, the American version directed by Gore Verbinski and starring Naomi Watts. For those who may have missed this one (i.e. you've been living under a rock for the last 12 years), here's a little blurb about it:

"Before you die, you see the ring."

It sounded like just another urban legend - videotape filled with nightmarish images, leading to a phone call foretelling the viewer's death in exactly seven days. As a newspaper reporter, Rachel Keller was naturally skeptical of the story, until four teenagers all met with mysterious deaths exactly one week after watching just such a tape. Allowing her investigative curiosity to get the better of her, Rachel tracks down the video... and watches it. Now she has just seven days to unravel the mystery of the "ring".

I cannot say enough good things about this movie. I only wish I could go back in time so I can see it through fresh eyes, but even knowing how it turns out every time, it still fascinates me. It's taken me a long time to figure out why, but I think I finally have the answer:

The Ring is simply a very well-constructed story.

Below I've listed what I feel are essentials to any good story and how The Ring makes excellent use of each of these elements.

The Hook

As I've mentioned in a previous blog post, your opening paragraph in a short story is THE most important part of the story. In a novel, you have a little more leeway, but you'd better have hooked your reader right from page one, otherwise you risk losing him/her.

The Ring wastes no time at all hooking the reader. You are immediately drawn into the story as the movie opens with first a discussion between two teenagers about the urban legend of the videotape, followed by the death of one of the teens - the cursed videotape's first victim. It's a pretty creepy opening, and (at the time) it was a pretty unique concept. A "high concept" in fact, which is the buzzword I hear a lot in relation to a story that can be easily pitched with a succinctly-stated premise. It's usually framed by the question "what if", as in: "What if a videotape could cause the death of the viewer exactly seven days after watching it?". This "what if" question, if done well, will cause the reader, or the viewer in this case, to want to ask more questions,  like "What exactly is causing these deaths?" and "Where did the tape come from?". Reader/Viewer = hooked.

The Conflict

Conflict is essential to a good story, obviously. But there are other important things you should remember about story conflicts. Conflict should be introduced, or hinted at, as early as possible in the story, preferably right on the first page, definitely within the first chapter. Also, there are two kinds of conflict, internal and external (which I've also covered in previous blog posts), and a good story must have both to be effective.

In the case of The Ring, the main character's conflict starts a little late for my tastes. The Ring employs a technique I would NOT recommend, namely the use of a prologue which doesn't directly involve the main character, although I suppose it loosely does, since the girl killed at the beginning of the movie is Rachel's niece. Somehow in movies this works though, and I can forgive it in this case for an otherwise perfectly executed movie. The death of Rachel's niece is more like an inciting event, but the real conflict begins when Rachel watches the tape herself. 

The problem with the curse placed on Rachel is the external conflict of the story, but there are some internal conflicts going on as well. Rachel's internal conflicts involve her need to protect her son. She also needs to resolve her past history with her son's father in the story. One could argue these are also external conflicts, but because they have such an emotional component to them, I'd categorize them more as internal ones.

The Characters


What is the trend for typical horror movies? A bunch of teens get together for some partying, sex, drinking, drugs, what have you. Then they all get picked off one by one by the serial killer, all dying in interesting and unique ways, until the last survivor gets the jump on the killer. Or doesn't. Whatever. Blah. Blah blah blah.

The problem with these types of movies is that you could care less about the characters. They're all just stock characters, vehicles to showcase a lot of bloodletting and depravity by the killer, who you crazily wind up rooting for in these stories. (One of the only exceptions to my indifference to these types of movies is The Cabin in the Woods, an excellent movie which deserves an entire study itself.)

If you want the reader/viewer to be vested in your story, then you need to create characters that he/she can relate to, root for, and care about.

The Ring breaks the mold for most horror movies. It introduces a mother and son and then pits the curse against this bond.   THIS is what will invest the watcher. What parent wouldn't cringe knowing his/her son may die? Or, worse, that he/she will die and leave a child alone, defenseless, in the world?

The Ticking Clock

A great plot device in many of my favorite stories is the "ticking clock". There's nothing that invests a reader more than when there's a chance the main character races against the clock but MAY NOT SUCCEED in time. This creates tension, suspense, drama, lots of action, etc. All great keys to a reader's continued interest and enjoyment of a story.

Where is the "ticking clock" in The Ring? The phone call Rachel receives after she watches the tape tells us: "Seven days". She literally has a ticking clock, a period of time where she MUST figure out how to save herself and those she loves, or they will all die. 

Raising the Stakes

The main character has a problem, and then solves the problem. End of story. Exciting? If you simply describe it that way, not really. What's so exciting about a character who is presented with a problem and then solves it easily, with no additional risks, obstacles, or conflicts? Like anything in life, a goal means so much more if you've had to struggle to reach it. It's part of the human condition. 

In The Ring, it's not enough that Rachel was crazy enough to watch the tape and now has to figure out  how to stop the curse on her. She then involves her estranged boyfriend, who is also her son's father. So now she's responsible for TWO people. If that weren't bad enough, her son winds up watching the tape. Now the stakes have REALLY been raised. Aside from these emotional elements, there are other natural, and supernatural, forces at work to prevent her from finding the answers she seeks. (I won't go into those in case you under the rock people still haven't seen this one.) 


Theme has always been one of those elusive things for me in my own writing, but when I see others make use of it, I'm impressed. Themes seem to speak to the reader/viewer on a different level, invoking views of the world on them that he/she may share, and shedding light on others that aren't so inviting. This is done many times through the use of repeated images (symbols), or even entire scenarios looked at in slightly different ways.

Two themes that are prominent in The Ring involve parent-child relationships and water. The first is used to compare and contrast loving parent-child relationships with those that weren't so loving or were strained in some way. The other is a repeated theme involving the essence behind where the cursed video tape came from. It's a very foreboding and oppressive element throughout the entire story and serves many purposes - foreshadowing; setting the ominous, somber mood; and invoking other, deeper symbolism. The dark, murky waters shown throughout the movie symbolize death, appropriately enough. 

Twists and Turns


 You are on a journey with the main character. So when the main character thinks he/she has that "eureka" moment, you share in that eureka moment. But when the m.c. suddenly realizes all he/she thought was true and right was really a red herring, or not the entire story, you are frustrated inside like he/she is. Both of you try to go through the entire story in your head. Where could you have gone wrong? Where does the real answer lie? You are FULLY hooked into the story at this point, and those twists and turns are instrumental, not so much in further hooking the reader, but almost in validating whether the reader is truly hooked or not. The hooked reader MUST keep reading now, because he/she is now fully invested.

I can't really go into too much detail on how The Ring throws twists and turns into the story. This is part of the reason why I'd love to go back and watch this movie as if I have never seen it before. The twists and turns are some of the best I've seen in a story.

Satisfying Ending


What does it mean to have a satisfying ending in a story? Yes, it IS satisfying when the prince and princess get together at the end and live happily ever after. But a story doesn't have to have a happily ever after ending in order to be satisfying. The ending simply has to MAKE SENSE. A story has to have an internal logic to it, as strange as that logic might be, and the ending has to follow logical steps from the beginning. The original conflict has to be resolved, even if the outcome is a bad one. If the beginning of the story foreshadowed the events that are presented at the end, then this is definitely a sure sign the story is a well-constructed one.

Again, I don't want to give anything away for those Ring virgins. For those who HAVE seen the movie, would you say the ending a happy one? I wouldn't say so, personally. But, the movie HAS to end that way. It makes sense, in its own warped, cursed videotape world logic. In fact, the movie already hints at how it's going to end, right at the beginning. 

SO... there you have it. A nice case study of a stellar horror movie, and a well-constructed story. Go out and watch it yourself if you've never seen it, so you can see what I mean. If you HAVE seen it before, maybe you never thought of the movie in this way before. So go out and watch it AGAIN.

Enjoy your Halloween, everyone. Hope it's a scream!

Thursday, October 23, 2014

Show vs. Tell - Halloween Edition

Hi all

I hope you're all ready to enjoy my FAVORITE season of the year. Halloween is coming, and I couldn't be more excited. Unfortunately, it's also my busiest time of the year. The kids are always especially busy with things in the fall.

In addition to everything else going on, I'm also in the middle of that short story course I mentioned earlier. Recently, the course covered the obligatory "show vs. tell" topic in relation to the opening paragraph of a short story. I won't go into too many details on the specifics of what's written in the course materials. I wouldn't want to take away from the livelihood of the people who teach and put the course together.

I WILL cover the two things you must always remember about your opening paragraph, however, and I think these views are shared by everyone I've ever heard speak on the topic:

1. The opening paragraph is THE MOST IMPORTANT part of your short story. If you can't get a reader's interest in that first paragraph, the reader will most likely not want to read on.

2. In order to do that, you must immerse the reader in what's happening. The reader has to be invested in the main character and his/her problem, and the reader must be compelled to read on.

So in honor of this topic, and in honor of Halloween coming up, I'll share with you a piece of the latest assignment I submitted to the course. It's an opening to a new Halloween-themed story I've been working on. The assignment was to write a "telling" version of the opening paragraph of my story and then to write a "showing" version of the same paragraph.

"Telling" opening paragraph:

Marvyn made scary cupcakes for Halloween. He was hoping to bring back the essence of Halloween. Halloween had gotten too cute over the years. Marvyn longed for the good ol' days of scary costumes, homemade treats, and scary movies on TV on Halloween night.

"Showing" opening paragraph:

Marvyn applied the frosting tip, and a gash of red appeared in the middle of the zombie's forehead, as if he had slashed at it with a scalpel. Another stroke with a different bag of frosting, and the zombie's skin appeared to pull back from its face. Satisfied, he placed the cupcake next to the others. When the neighborhood kids, with their cute mermaid, princess, and robot costumes, came calling this Halloween, he would show them what Halloween was really all about. Unfortunately, the days of enjoying horror movies on TV were long gone, but that was fine. He'd make his own entertainment.

I'm not going to say the "telling" opening paragraph is perfect, but I'm sure you can easily see the differences between the two. Which one would you rather read? Which one makes you part of the scene? Which one introduces the main character better and makes his conflict known? Which ones makes you want to read on?

Here's something to remember when dealing with the opening paragraph of your story that they didn't cover in my course. After you've written your first, second, fifth draft even, always assume your paragraph is a "telling" paragraph, and ask yourself what you can to do add more details and make it a more "showing" paragraph. You can never spend too much time on the first paragraph, so make it shine.

Happy Halloween all, and happy writing!